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I want to be
In love with someone
And watch the light
Dance on the tips of her skin.

Like the sea,
I'll be the ebb,
And she'll be the flow
Moving together in perfect rhythm .

I want that feeling
Of confusing, alternating, maddening
Love to fill me from within
And to know how it feels,
To hear the words
The first poem I've written in a while.
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StarlightShoals Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Student Writer
Lovely. :)
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giffordm Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
i really like this
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I-AM-KAI Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013
You captured something here, least of all my attention and imagination.
You have a beautiful way of creating a picture with your words.
Mesmerizing, a poem I could I could quite happily lose myself in.
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Ikineko Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
Your poem made me melt... it is beautiful. The words are lovely, and capture the feeling perfectly. I can't praise you enough!
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BlowYourHeartOpen Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it :) .
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Like the sea,
I'll be the ebb,
And she'll be the flow
Moving together in perfect rhythm . "

I especially liked this stanza.
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BlowYourHeartOpen Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :) .
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RiseandBe Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure!
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fibernite Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
i like it
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BlowYourHeartOpen Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. I'm glad you like it :) .
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